Score: 10

"DAMMMMMMNNNN IT!"

submission: H.E.L.L

date: May 19, 2009

YOU'VE STOLEN MAH IDEA...well sorta...ive defnitely thought of this once. nice acronym tho.

i gotta say that i liked it and of course i liked your view on hell cause i've had 'similar' ideas about it. funny parts were funny, and i thought that the end wouldve been other way around (hero gets suspected of bein a terrorist cause of mess in system), but your way is more how i would've done it (only he shouldve added Russian Download Sites to the list, cause i found those places have more porn and are more dangerous than most torrents xD).

ONE THING: VOICES WERE ANNOYING! xpecially main character, sounded too pussy whipped (which i would gladly fill in that role if i had a mic :P). its probly what u wanted so it didn't give it away but was still annoying. also change some of the dialogue and u got urself something on par to an actual series.

I think it shouldve continued on atleast a tiny bit only cause u ended it with a feeling that it was unfinished, that there was still more. but hey, u gave me a good flash and i aint gonna whine. 10/10 cause im in a good mood.

Score: 9

"it's been done before..."

submission: War, Snow and Fire

date: May 19, 2009

Alot of stuff around this is unoriginal, and i'm sorry but im obsessed w/ originality (dont ask me y...however, because of that my stories are usually EXTREMELY imaginative). that loses u a point.

Other than that really, really, really good. of course we all kno the story we've seen it in Iron Giant, ET, and other movies, but this story is very successful. y? :because its good and its realistic. a person's kid, xpecially if that person doesnt pay attention to them, wont be scared of something like a dragon or the Iron Giant. he/she just knows it needs a friend and heres somthing that might make a good one.

Then signs start to appear, gets discovered, government comes, etc. Process sped up because her father was a general or something. When things get outta hand cheesy shit happens. Thing leaves. End of story.

Graphics are different. even tho i've seen graphics like this all the time i never get bored of them. very good for communicating emotion and letting the viewer imagine what the people are really like behind the shadow that u present them as. simplicity also provides great and easy motions. and, it may just be how the dad looks, but it reminds me sorta of psychonauts and i LOVED the art in there.

Harry: music is a lil cheesy, but i think that it fits perfectly and is probly the glue that held this thing together. U should give him a full cookie, valerofond :D

srry for makin yall read but when somethin like this is put up i just GOTTA say sometin. keep up the good work.

Added note: i slightly agree w/ Orangevampire, for a second i nearly thought he was gonna eat her for some reason xD

Score: 10

"Yo se un poco espanol---(espanoles FTW :D)"

submission: Hoy te amo ++

date: April 10, 2009

No me gusta la musica tu usar...pero buen idea.

eh....don kno nough spanish do say all i want to so itd be easier to say it in english rather than resorting to spanglish.

Anyways im tryin to draw usin mouse 2 cause even though line tool CAN look sexier, its just easier for me...And this is y...a very highly rated well done flash that has SPANISH in it (and a drawing style similah to mine).

and btw for all u who don kno, Hoy Te Amo= Today I Love You....sweet and yes that was a VERY good idea. SO good that ive come up w/ something similar before (dammit lotta ppl been stealin mah ideas lately :P, even though this was made like 4 an a half years ago).

ill have to look up more o this sometime. great job and keep up teh good work.

Score: 9

"dis song makes me go Hoo seh ah!"

submission: The Ballad Of Chuck Norris!

date: November 2, 2008

Great, fast paced, addictive song. Not as good as Bukkake Udon and tats teh only reason im rating it a 9 instead of a 10.

And i went lol when i heard FUCK ME FUCK ME FUCK ME!

Score: 10

"zomethingz can never get old...no matter how fd up"

submission: The Bukkake Udon Song

date: November 2, 2008

at first glance, doesnt seem like anytin new. But then u want MORE!

Ive played this song over and over again while im doing stuff. even watching my animes (not too hard since i watch subs)!

Izza very addictive and good song. I wouldnt say its too poppish cause ive heard alotta pop punk bands wich sound nearly completely dif. And Im surprised u guys sound so American/Canadian. i didnt kno u guys were from Singapore for a while.

Its better w/ the music vid (wich made me lol) but its still great alone. if Ronin is anythin like this ill have to check em out too. ill be looking for more from u guys. Sayonara.

Score: 10

".....new and improved!"

submission: Death by bear (w/vox)

date: June 1, 2008

this is a hell of a lot better with voice!