Score: 10

"DAMMMMMMNNNN IT!"

submission: H.E.L.L

date: May 19, 2009

YOU'VE STOLEN MAH IDEA...well sorta...ive defnitely thought of this once. nice acronym tho.

i gotta say that i liked it and of course i liked your view on hell cause i've had 'similar' ideas about it. funny parts were funny, and i thought that the end wouldve been other way around (hero gets suspected of bein a terrorist cause of mess in system), but your way is more how i would've done it (only he shouldve added Russian Download Sites to the list, cause i found those places have more porn and are more dangerous than most torrents xD).

ONE THING: VOICES WERE ANNOYING! xpecially main character, sounded too pussy whipped (which i would gladly fill in that role if i had a mic :P). its probly what u wanted so it didn't give it away but was still annoying. also change some of the dialogue and u got urself something on par to an actual series.

I think it shouldve continued on atleast a tiny bit only cause u ended it with a feeling that it was unfinished, that there was still more. but hey, u gave me a good flash and i aint gonna whine. 10/10 cause im in a good mood.

Score: 9

"it's been done before..."

submission: War, Snow and Fire

date: May 19, 2009

Alot of stuff around this is unoriginal, and i'm sorry but im obsessed w/ originality (dont ask me y...however, because of that my stories are usually EXTREMELY imaginative). that loses u a point.

Other than that really, really, really good. of course we all kno the story we've seen it in Iron Giant, ET, and other movies, but this story is very successful. y? :because its good and its realistic. a person's kid, xpecially if that person doesnt pay attention to them, wont be scared of something like a dragon or the Iron Giant. he/she just knows it needs a friend and heres somthing that might make a good one.

Then signs start to appear, gets discovered, government comes, etc. Process sped up because her father was a general or something. When things get outta hand cheesy shit happens. Thing leaves. End of story.

Graphics are different. even tho i've seen graphics like this all the time i never get bored of them. very good for communicating emotion and letting the viewer imagine what the people are really like behind the shadow that u present them as. simplicity also provides great and easy motions. and, it may just be how the dad looks, but it reminds me sorta of psychonauts and i LOVED the art in there.

Harry: music is a lil cheesy, but i think that it fits perfectly and is probly the glue that held this thing together. U should give him a full cookie, valerofond :D

srry for makin yall read but when somethin like this is put up i just GOTTA say sometin. keep up the good work.

Added note: i slightly agree w/ Orangevampire, for a second i nearly thought he was gonna eat her for some reason xD

Score: 10

"Yo se un poco espanol---(espanoles FTW :D)"

submission: Hoy te amo ++

date: April 10, 2009

No me gusta la musica tu usar...pero buen idea.

eh....don kno nough spanish do say all i want to so itd be easier to say it in english rather than resorting to spanglish.

Anyways im tryin to draw usin mouse 2 cause even though line tool CAN look sexier, its just easier for me...And this is y...a very highly rated well done flash that has SPANISH in it (and a drawing style similah to mine).

and btw for all u who don kno, Hoy Te Amo= Today I Love You....sweet and yes that was a VERY good idea. SO good that ive come up w/ something similar before (dammit lotta ppl been stealin mah ideas lately :P, even though this was made like 4 an a half years ago).

ill have to look up more o this sometime. great job and keep up teh good work.

Score: 7

"it was weird..."

submission: linkin prk kem 2 my house

date: March 22, 2009

i will repeat: weird....not very funny...but somehow entertaining

And you like all the nu-metal bands i do so u get a few extra points for that.

Score: 10

"i like the dark."

submission: EFN Episode 2: Brother

date: March 22, 2009

This suits me. It reminds me of my writing. not only the dark in it, but the takin of something cliche or something moral an cutesy and turning it upside down so every1 can see the reality and the flaws of it, sorta like Watchmen. With all of the flashes on newgrounds you either have to be either real funny or real dark to catch my attention. this is the dark i like.

The moral speech made me think he would live, but thankfully he didnt. i guess i watch too many animes and had that disapointment too many times.

My suggestions(other than ditch the weird british accents):
1. the killer guy seems more of a sadistic guy both emotionally and physically. he should be giving the main character more grief and torturing his oppenents a tiny bit more.
2. You have a weird flow...seems nonlinear. watched the first episode afore this cause both had such high ratings and the first 1 disapointed me like a cheap hooker w/ STDs. The story had so many bumps and holes and shit like that. this would make a better 1st episode cause then you could have the other parts in flashbacks, xpecially w/ that awesome twisted Apparition guy. have him near death then a flashback. ussually im no fan of those, but in here it would really work good.

You've also inspired me to use an angular look in my flashes (which is good cause my usual drawing style doesnt work w/ flash very well for some reason). Hope there's more on the way soon. Luego.

Score: 10

"ahahaha! perfect."

submission: Unleash Your Imagination

date: March 21, 2009

i wanted to finish the thing afore i commented, but this is just helpin me 2 much. ya kno...its funny how perfect the timing is on it 2. i just got flash the day that this popped onto the front page. amazin, no?

anyways i gotta say some pretty helpful stuff. ive been toyin around w/ flash and maybe if i had cs3 it would be easier to figure out meself (cause cs4 is confusin as HELL...we had cs2 or cs1 or sometin when i took a class w/ flash in 3rd grade and it was EASY to understand) but i dont so ive been lookin at tutorials frantically tryin to figure out how to do it. Yours is the best cause its got everythin e-z to understand and all in 1 place. i'll be mixin this w/ some help from my art classes i took like 3 years ago.

Thanks again, luego.

Score: 5

"ummm....yeahhhhhhhhhhhh"

submission: Can't Catch Tomorrow

date: March 17, 2009

fan of lostprophets and teh sort...but wat...teh....fukz?

I have a vow to watch flash animations all the way through before i rate...this is like the ONLY time ive disobeyed that rule cause i couldnt bring myself to finish it. i think i kno where ur goin, but...couldve done much better. Also some parts sorta creeped me out. However, kudos for animation and i chuckled cause i noticed Tifa at the beginning.

Ways to make it better: TOO MUCH SYMBOLISM. i agree with match words w/ lyrics but keep up pace 2. also it was pretty pointless. no story, nothing to keep you interested, nothing to draw you in, etc. In fact, i was gonna ditch it within the first 15 seconds cause it was just....ehhhhh........weird. and not the good kind. but my rule kept me on, and i still couldnt finish it.

I'm surprised that u got this high of a score and 2nd place. But grats an since it was ur first real flash, ill say u did okay. Still no excuse for this pointlessness and relative stupidity (and not the kind that makes you laugh). but ill repeat what i said earlier: good animation, good use of shadows (even though i like darker tones), and seein Tifa made me chuckle a tiny bit.

Score: 10

"THANK YOU FIORI PARTY!!!! :D"

submission: The TRUE death of Hinata

date: March 11, 2009

i wouldnt say hinata is overrated...i actually think shes relatively underrated (i most be livin unda a rock or sometin) but w/e, i still laughed.

Fiori Party i luv you, not in that way but still. Ur flashes are sexy. Good animation, good voices, good script, broken english in some parts, and PRODUCIONES (SPANISH!!!)! and u love to make jokes about naruto, which i agree is overrated. Its good, but seriously man. Thats y im happy ppl are getting killed off...even though some of my favorite chars are the ones DYING(*cough, kakashi n jiraiya*).

have to say though that is the most REALISTIC way hinata could die. xpecially the part about Sasuke doesn't luv u. and u used an 80s song i liked for the credits. great job, now get back ta work bitch afore i whip you.

Score: 9

"nj...thats all"

submission: Neverending Light

date: February 26, 2009

its really good. best way to get some1 into it aint bout ramblin on about it. its about telling them to play this game. i really like how u start off w/ nothing

my only problem is its short, and i was 1 sprite off on my first try (aka the one i did before reviewing). other tahn that i will like to see more and it reminds me of this survival game w/ aliens that i played when i was a lil kid.

Score: 10

"dude, great"

submission: Xionic Madness

date: February 19, 2009

its madness, but its got a story...brilliant. u seem to be good at making characters. and it was relatively realistic. i xpecially like wat azad did.

u kno its funny though that Xero is like me and ive had that name Xero for the longest time. The only 2 names ive had as long are Kaisen and Fusei (mhm).